Thursday, September 27, 2012

At the beach by Meleane

One lovely sunny day Ana, Annliz  Aldora and their  parents and I, were heading down to the beach. When we got there we had a nice shady spot and was just right for all of us.Then we all got changed and went swimming but Ana and Aldora parents was just going to stay.

“Oh no” screamed Aldora’s mum she had lost her wallet and all her money and credit cards will be gone. So we all tried to find it we checked everywhere but we just can’t find it. “ She must of left it at home” said Ana or you dropped it in the van.

It was time to pack up because it was about to rain but Aldora mum was still upset. As we were packing up the wallet was sticking out out of her hoodie. “Hahaha” cried out loud Annliz.

Hopping in the van heading back home talking about how fun it was. THAT WAS THE BEST DAY EVER I hope we could do that agin

1 comment:

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