Thursday, April 26, 2012

Meleane's Camping Story

Some people that I know have boring holidays. I always have fun holidays.

On Saturday it was so cool because my family and I went camping just in the backyard. It seems silly but its cool. You could play all sorts of games at night time. We played spotlight. When we were finished we started to make a fire with the marshmallows my aunty bought and we made s'mores which were so delicious. Then we all went to sleep.


  1. Hi Meleane,

    That seems to be fun!! Spotlight is awesome.

    KEEP IT UP!!!

  2. Great hook to begin your writing Meleane, well done.

    Just remember that your paragraphs should be about one idea and should be no more than four sentences long.


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